Saturday, April 23, 2011

one word: styrofoam2: wound time

dim sum
organic chemistry misses
the point, if pointing
is your bliss, point west
she misses the point all
the time: grasp the tear,
animate the wound
time gathers you to
her womb.



Blogger Teresa said...

I would not call dim sum styrofoam, although the molecular formula does look like so many little dim sum blobs all stuck together. How many people have wounds in the womb???

6:06 PM  
Blogger Dee Martin said...

hmmm I may need to revisit oneword :)
not sure I like the sound of an animated wound but those last lines are beautiful...

7:25 PM  
Blogger murat11 said...

T: Dim sum is "defiantly" not styrofoam; remember, this is all collage, the polite way of saying "tangential as hell." Though I dispensed with the punctuation, "wound" should likely be followed by a colon or a dash: time's womb is the healer.

5:21 PM  
Blogger murat11 said...

Dee: I'm planning to unleash oneword on my soon to be graduating seniors: I figure that's about all I can get out of them by now. (I may be overestimating them.) Getting back in the groove meself.

5:26 PM  
Blogger Dee Martin said...

I know exactly what you mean. Stick a fork in them prof - they are DONE..
We have TAKS the next few days. I would rather stick a fork in ME lol

7:04 PM  
Blogger murat11 said...

Dee: Charred, most likely. I kind of like the self-inflicted fork, too . . .

7:12 PM  

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