[still proceeding]
10,000 strands of midnight stolen
to calm the line,
10,000 angels robbed
to clear the dime store
bandits, vertical
shuck and jive,
an ache beyond
dovelight, beyond
the curds of a shattered
dream. Watch him
crawling, watch him
strapped to view
this lifetime of petty crimes,
delicate innuendo,
disco ball frenzy
in the wake of
remittance &
calls for payment,
past dews,
calamitous mists. Green
calls, green cries
deep down
for the soul, in the ashes
of a Wednesday
that is no more. Resurrect
the man, the pagan
dream, the jettisoned
tiger, the thundering
god. Healing
of a kind
in the westward mind.
to calm the line,
10,000 angels robbed
to clear the dime store
bandits, vertical
shuck and jive,
an ache beyond
dovelight, beyond
the curds of a shattered
dream. Watch him
crawling, watch him
strapped to view
this lifetime of petty crimes,
delicate innuendo,
disco ball frenzy
in the wake of
remittance &
calls for payment,
past dews,
calamitous mists. Green
calls, green cries
deep down
for the soul, in the ashes
of a Wednesday
that is no more. Resurrect
the man, the pagan
dream, the jettisoned
tiger, the thundering
god. Healing
of a kind
in the westward mind.
Labels: ash wednesday, gwyneth, waking
7 Comments:
This is quite a nuanced introduction to the Lenten season. I keep rereading certain lines. “past dews, calamitous mists” It’s intriguing.
Thank you, ALT. Such is the subversive presence of Mardi Gras / Lent (and poetry) (and the unconscious), that this was not even "intended" (whatever that means) as a Lenten poem, but poems will have their way...
Paschal, I really like this one. It's rhythm feels good. The phrasing is excellent. Words like "10,000 angels robbed to clear the dime store bandits", "strapped to view", "the ashes of a Wednesday that is no more" just keep echoing through my mind. It's all good! Amen.
Peace! Hope! & Joy!
Thanks very much, Lee. This was one of those "gotta write something" poems: you feel a rhythm, a pulse, desire, and then push. A "bit" like birthing (a tiny bit, mind you), only much faster. Poets have it so easy over birthing mothers.
this is beautiful murat
Thank you, jsd.
Highly effective vertical shuck and jive. An insurrectional resurrection.
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